Query Hack: Critique #14 – MG Urban Fantasy

Dear Query Hack, Obsessed with his father’s murder, Leonidas discovers he’s a descendant of the legendary monster hunter Abraham van Helsing. And therefore, a target of the monsters responsible for his dad’s death. Neato story premise! I like that we're quickly acquainted with Leonidas' abilities/family history, but I found myself wanting a hook about Leonidas … Continue reading Query Hack: Critique #14 – MG Urban Fantasy

Query Hack: Twitter Pitch, Critique #12 – YA Science Fiction

HEYA, BOOK NERDS! In case you missed it, we have now added Twitter pitch critiques to Query Hack.   WHAT IS QUERY HACK? Query Hack is a query critique platform launched by the iWriterly team where writers have the opportunity to submit their book queries and Twitter pitches for FREE feedback from an industry professional. As part of iWriterly’s mission to give back to … Continue reading Query Hack: Twitter Pitch, Critique #12 – YA Science Fiction